Friday 27 June 2014

Room 5's 2050 future classroom awesome sentence challenge

WALT use a range of sentence starters, conjunctions and connectives to make our writing more interesting.

Starters :  We have; There are; At Oaklands; In our school etc
Conjunctions: ...and..., ... but ...,  ...so..., ...because...
Connectives:  When; Whenever; In order to; If; After; Instead of

Here are some of our sentences.
                 

Zoe - Whenever Lilly talks Kaite has to go in her bubble +3
Georgia - You get your own personal fan because it might be hot + 3
Tr'e- If you want chocolate you have to give Mr Forman some +3
Mishca - In order to get Smiley you have to show respect
Ashton  - In order to go in the spa pool you need to be good
Joel - If you are good you get to go home in the rocket ship
Noah - In order to go in the water slide the teacher has to catch you being good.
Matina - If you want to go on the computer you have to give Mr Forman chocolate
Jack - In order to use the golden desk you have to be good
Logan - In order to go down the water slide you have to be good
Tyzell - In order to go on the mini racing track you have to be good
Crystal - We have lots of building and they are different shapes
Natalia - Whenever you press a button Yoghurt Story comes up
Solani - We have trees inside the classroom for picking so that we can have fruit anytime we want
Bonnie - In order to get a golden Ferrari you need to give your teacher chocolate and $1 000 000
Summer - Whenever I go home my robot does my homework for me
Sophie - If you want to go up to the 39 storey treehouse you have to say the secret password
Jordan - My butler does my homework for me
Zoe - After you are good you get chocolates and sweets
Georgia - If you are good the whole class gets to go to Yoghurt Story or Soyo
Noah - If you want to see the magic clown you have to get tickets
Tyzell - If you get thirsty you get a free milkshake
Mishca - If you show that you can silent read then you get your reading licence
Isabelle - Instead of water the pool will be chocolate
Liam - Whenever you be good you get to go in the pool
Kynan - In order to go on a plane you have to read for 100 000 minutes


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